Writing B (23) 
Please complete your revisions of your introduction and body paragraph(s).  Use the checklist to help you organize your ideas. Also, use the hand written comments on the draft that was handed back to you.  We will begin the conclusion next class.  Paper is due before the Dec. break
Posted by On 11 December, 2015 at 1:52 PM  18 Comments

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